2010년 8월 19일 목요일

[TOEFL Writing] It is a waste of time to play computer games.

Playing games can lead to addiction for many children in modern society. In other words, many of the young would not be able to stop playing computer games if they are repeatedly exposed to them. Therfore, it can be said that video or computer games is a waste of time because many people often cannot control their desire to play more of those games.



Constantly playing computer games can be harmful to people's health. Putting it differently, it can trigger many health related problems such as obesity, eye strain, and even anxiety. In this sense, people should not play computer games too freqently to avoid health related problems caused by it.

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